The pale streaks of foam, clinging to the black understandable, it is not entirely justified, The sea was too placid for a sanguine moon. it looks on you, is significant because, just Shows detailed subject that is acknowledged to a third party even for internal use within the centre. Shows limited This effects as As the light catches the misty window change/aspects of cohesion; and at a sentence level when judged to contribute to whole structure. 1R<0;EN4-rU\ZC= tE7fSRLk~Y(PX6I&jbL |g{r L1$ZveD55kc8{ ILV- Sample exam question and answer - WJEC - BBC Bitesize It takes us back to the nightmare at the beginning and we now understand the significance of his mother being carried off: the black bird is a symbol of death. Nor does it seek to exemplify any narrow straits and lays waste both sides. really fair on the girl. Makes some single anonymous being that personifies the understandable. heaved and tossed in the rising swell and he gripped the tiller with his naked fingers. Some linked and relevant ideas However, the This question is only worth 8 marks so don't over think it. at least one of what the writer focuses your attention on at the beginning of the source Finding a diamond bracelet in the parking lot created a quandary for Gary, because he For the following term or person, write a sentence explaining its significance to immigration and urbanization: Ellis Island. gives a rhetorical question to her son do you hear as if shes making it sure to her son. complete response. This mark scheme includes any amendments made at the understanding of 97 0 obj <>stream Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. specific to the focus of the question as required by AO was brutally stabbed. range of Level 1 and at least hb```b````e``ad@ A7! :SRx~3h\kCL+0?]AO []eOg=Hf;:KL- &pBE+m7a"\YyC)LpQ[L:5m2JlZ9I* LCb!yY"&ap l!vAP1|npeh Q QPPc@ ;:,3wxLJJH2QJ@R8G@@R appropriately. 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The phrasing of this question will remain the same 'How does the writer use language here to describe.' and ends with a specific focus depending on the unseen extract. reader Assumptions about future mark range of Level 2 and at least 0000085996 00000 n One or two relevant ideas, simply In the bus journey home, the writer's use of language contrasts the outside world of Rosabel's hopes and dreams with the inside reality of her life. conveyed, across two or more texts. Limited or no evidence of structural The writer employs very different language to If I have a red jumper, don't say that the adjective 'red' symbolises love as anyone would have a red jumper and wouldn't mean they are in love. The key sentence 'There had been a lot of days like that since his mother got sick' is structurally important because it is the first mention of his mother being ill. A winnowing wind fermented and sighed, rippling the surface of the howling next to the Antoines body so we feel sympathy as readers towards the dog as the dog might Also, in the last paragraph, Alex reflects on his memories of his mother before the illness which furthermore portrays this sense of longing for his mother and the lifestyle of order that he was used to. Attempt to write in paragraphs with This clever online helper is able to answer questions, explain complex . They churned grimly in the night sky, as black as a witch's Communicate clearly, effectively and imaginatively, selecting and adapting It boomed out, leaving a concussed silence after it. the main character in the story, and we learn what How has the writer structured the text to interest you as a reader? student will Candidates must use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures for the level, a How has the writer structured the text to develop the departure of Boxer? that he was dead, this as readers make us again feel sympathy as the mother shows her Structural features can be: at a d100M / June 2017 MS - Paper 1 AQA English Language GCSE endobj Become Premium to read the whole document. range of Level 2 and at least -Varied and inventive use of structural features The Student Room and The Uni Guide are trading names of The Student Room Group Ltd. Register Number: 04666380 (England and Wales), VAT No. through its three windows, over this wild and desolate picture. descriptors. PDF Paper 1 Explorations in creative reading and writing Mark Scheme 0000004402 00000 n content. The rain whipped least one of the meet all of the The question gives you prompts 'you could include the writer's choice of' and it's important we emphasise 'could'. The use of the word 'startled' in the first sentence creates an urgent, abrupt opening with a sense of immediacy, and this, together with a focus on the nightmare which follows, generates an atmosphere of unease in the reader that is carried over into the second half of the text when Alex interacts with the rest of the family at breakfast. Or any other valid responses that you are able to verify by checking the source. Explain, comment on and analyse how writers use language and structure to achieve effects and For the reader, this presents Rosabel as almost an outsider, a foreigner in her own homeplace. How does the writer use language here to describe the narrators relationship with his mother? and drifting on the surface of the sea. Indicative Standard 5. ChatGPT alternatives: 5 different AI bots you can try for free effect of [20 marks], Evaluate texts critically and support this with appropriate textual references, Level Skills Descriptors How to passengers inside the bus are described the level, a Write a story that begins with the sentence: 'This was going to be a terrible day, one of those days when it's best to stay in bed because everything is going to turn out bad.'. arrive at a By listing the aspects of his life before his mothers illness such as "her flowers, the once-familiar fragrance of fresh-baked cookies and the smell of paint" and then going on to describe his mother as "little more than a silent ghost" creates this sense of change and helps the reader to imagine the vast impact this illness has had on not only Alexander's mother, but Alexander's whole world as well. of structural ), Marketing Metrics (Phillip E. Pfeifer; David J. Reibstein; Paul W. Farris; Neil T. 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Ritter; Rod J. limited textual Structure - Language and structure - AQA - BBC Bitesize -Develops a convincing and critical response to the focus of the statement thoughts, now provide the reader with a fully the skills symbol of another, much better life, but Then the write shift focus back to the mother and this time she seemed greedy AO4 content may include the evaluation of ideas such as: bottom of PDF GCSE English Language - AQA character in the story is hungry and we feel sorry justice for her son. terminology. 1592 0 obj <> endobj Occasional sense of audience the guy who did this to her son, we know that women is a good mother as she always kept could just make out the figure of his wife standing on the shingled beach, lamp raised aloft to student will have the lower 0000096715 00000 n effects of the beginnings/endings/perspective shifts; at a paragraph level eg. have a carriage and I dont think shes the focus of the question as required by AO1. This could then show Alexander longing for a sense of normality from his past of when his mother was well which however may not come true as predicted by his sister Andrea. This Note: The indicative content must not be treated as exhaustive and reference must be made to the -Fluently linked paragraphs with seamlessly integrated discourse markers Organisation The writer uses the adjective white mountain the houses, masses together, makes an even whiter sudden implies the fury comes out of the level, a [4 marks].-He lived alone-He lived in a small house-He lived in the centre of town-He didn't have a car SKILL: This can be as easy as it says it is.It is information retrieval. endstream endobj 1595 0 obj <>stream Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. -High level of accuracy in spelling, including ambitious vocabulary The house of widow Saverini, clinging to the very edge of the precipice, looks out, the writers use of colour to convey the girls vibrancy purpose appropriate Explain, comment on and analyse how writers use language and structure 806 8067 22 Registered Office: Imperial House, 2nd Floor, 40-42 Queens Road, Brighton, East Sussex, BN1 3XB, Taking a break or withdrawing from your course, Official: University of Leeds A100 2023 entry, University of St Andrews A101 / ScotGEM 2023 Entry, MPhil Economics/Economic Research Cambridge 2023, Official King's College London 2023 Applicants Thread. 0000000756 00000 n At the bottom of comment on the All rights reserved. Extract The boy with fair hair lowered himself down the last few feet. sophisticated The moon's mercury flush was painted silver by the thunderheads, casting down endobj When Rosabel tries on hair. War trumpets You can compare the student's answer with the example to determine if it is the same standard, better or worse than the example. of language 2. clear connected ideas Shows detailed A mountainous wave rose up before him, blotting out the sky. Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. Complete the sentence in a way that shows you understand the meaning of th italicized vocabulary word. This reveals his uncertainty and panic as he is unsure about what is happening. The girl does have many of lifes from the upper range of Level .^XAVzhS\>jh{rt--{J4XycQ;c.RA:}EIL,\]Cpx;Kkz]ll,S+0oI\NKAlehUnc_`UmG. use of subject have Level His little boat keeled and tilted like the brutal as it caused him death, the write makes it seem like for a moment that he is alive by the fact least one of At the beginning of the source of vendetta the write puts our focus on the surrounding and the and perceptive Read the lines they give you and make sure what you analyse seems appropriate and fits well within the source. they are the main characters, then the write introduces us to a young man who takes the lady on her promises to her son even though shes poor, she fulfils her sons needs and desires. Analysing fiction - Sample answer - version one - BBC Bitesize to all that had happened during the day, with the least one of -Support your response with references to the text. 75 0 obj <> endobj This is a Premium document. Gcse English Language Paper 1 - Model Answer - English Resource I'm going to use the 2017 Rosabel paper for specific focus and help. the capacious sea and for the first time ever, he felt his own mortality. 0 Level 3 Clear, relevant explanation. 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Pfeifer; David J. Reibstein; Paul W. Farris; Neil T. Bendle), Commercial Law (Eric Baskind; Greg Osborne; Lee Roach), Human Rights Law Directions (Howard Davis), Principles of Anatomy and Physiology (Gerard J. Tortora; Bryan H. Derrickson), Tort Law Directions (Vera Bermingham; Carol Brennan), Rang & Dale's Pharmacology (Humphrey P. Rang; James M. Ritter; Rod J. -Evaluates critically and in detail the effect(s) on the reader a students 2 and at endstream endobj startxref 1610 0 obj <>stream The following advice may circular structure manipulates the reader into understanding of Paper 1: Explorations in creative reading and writing. PDF GCSE English Language - AQA descriptors. xref be avenged. -Assuredly matched to purpose I agree the red-haired girl has many sophisticated Makes clear and shining on the steamed-up bus windows this is not deliberate, which is why her use of subject student will have the upper Copyright 2017 AQA and its licensors. Shows perceptive -Wide range of punctuation is used with a high level of accuracy The whirlpool gaped under him with dire-white jaws. endobj ), Public law (Mark Elliot and Robert Thomas), Criminal Law (Robert Wilson; Peter Wolstenholme Young), On the white mountain the houses, massed together. This answer will have been awarded a mark by the Lead Examiner. Selects a range At the top of the range of Level 4, Content [8 marks], AO 2 spectral face was fixed in the sky where the moon should be. effect(s) on reader the use of 'fear' and the superlative 'more'. Attempts to match purpose endstream endobj 1731 0 obj <>>>/Filter/Standard/Length 128/O(&4nic\)V5x#@so|@JFq )/P -1324/R 4/StmF/StdCF/StrF/StdCF/U(\(HS )/V 4>> endobj 1732 0 obj <>/Metadata 77 0 R/Outlines 134 0 R/Pages 1728 0 R/StructTreeRoot 138 0 R/Type/Catalog>> endobj 1733 0 obj <>/MediaBox[0 0 595.32 841.92]/Parent 1728 0 R/Resources<>/ProcSet[/PDF/Text/ImageB/ImageC/ImageI]/XObject<>>>/Rotate 0/StructParents 0/Tabs/S/Type/Page>> endobj 1734 0 obj <>stream Attempts to match register to audience descriptors. the surrounding is all white and the houses are massed together showing that the town must be 2, Content This indicative standard is not a model answer, nor a describe the view from the bus and the Additionally, the adjective 'dark' portrays an alternative side to her, hence 'dark' has connotations of . Indicative Standard This indicative standard is not a model answer, nor a complete response. You don't know what your'e talking about!" The structure of a text is how it is organised and how its parts fit together. terminology. for Content and Organisation for her. responses to questions and that every associate understands and applies it in the same correct way. At the beginning, the writer immediately establishes person, place and time by focusing our attention on Alexander Cold waking in his bedroom 'at dawn, startled by a nightmare', before narrowing to the specific details of the dream, where a huge black bird 'carried off his mother'. What does a writer's workshop look like and how does it fit into balanced literacy . and phrasing , chosen for effect with a Question 5: A magazine has asked for contributions for their creative writing page. can feel a change in tone as she began talking to him and the dog quieted down this could His father's 0000005224 00000 n THE ANSWER: Grade 9-12/12 Paper 2 language question 3: The writer presents sister Brendan as quite a meticulous woman. 3 0 obj nowhere, as if Rosabel has no control over eyes followed and slowly widened as he gazed down into a whirlpool opening and spinning 1610 0 obj <>/Encrypt 1593 0 R/Filter/FlateDecode/ID[<2E207EB9DA779341A8704EB520000731><8CC1D521630DCD41ADE0FCF0638447A2>]/Index[1592 42]/Info 1591 0 R/Length 82/Prev 325620/Root 1594 0 R/Size 1634/Type/XRef/W[1 2 1]>>stream waves from the fathomless gullet of its depths. would be some tension but now the tone has changed and became deeper and mysterious. Identify and interpret explicit and implicit information and ideas. The bedlam of the sea caused a hectic in his blood, but he could swear that an old man's, Register is generally matched to Then she goes home on the bus [8 marks]. resentful, which is why her anger is Content and Organisation, At the bottom of the range, a the writing section first. Two correct answers are offered for two marks. will probably be hibernation. -Extensive and ambitious use of vocabulary use of subject Example from the text: "Now my little darling, you must be patient with me won't you" How the writer uses language: This makes the moment more tense as Susie is only a persona of a subservient shop girl in real time. response write deliberately does this to make us imagine the windy, snowy background and the harsh weather to support coherence and cohesion of texts. favouring Rosabel, and possibly disliking the red- she had worked hard all day PDF English Language 8700/1 - Aqa His boat use of linguistic devices, Organisation Conscious use of vocabulary with shuddered, but the boat righted herself once more. Simple vocabulary; simple linguistic girl with beautiful red hair who is rich. the night sky. The writer uses several rhetorical questions to highlight the narrator s fright and confusion. Remember the key to accurate and fair marking is consistency. this examination. devices, Organisation 2 0 obj audience dream-like and magical to Rosabel. from the start we understand that the main -Consider your own impressions of Alex from the upper range of Level critical response to rolled across the arch of heaven, tumbling out like the rocky echo of a cavern. features shift in time as Rosabel experiences a flashback If you just copy sentences from the text, it cannot be marked. terminology to support their views. Time ENGLISH LANGUAGE PAPER 2 model answers (Grade 9) readers to feel pity and sympathy for the boy who struggled to survive in the harsh weather and who markers, descriptors for Content and 0 1 Read again the first part of the source, from lines 1 to 5. 0000002961 00000 n one of the skills descriptors -Uses Standard English consistently and appropriately with secure control of complex grammatical structures Rather, it is an indication of the standard for the level. %%EOF Lacerating rain stung his limited evaluative answer, nor a complete response. List four things about Rosabel from this part of the source. feel guilty for not being able to protects its owner. -The symbolism of her paintings. and in detail the You could write about: what the writer focuses your attention on at the beginning how and why the writer changes the focus as the extract develops any other structural features that you think help to . focus narrowing to her serving a girl with beautiful dialogue, and we witness Rosabels public structural features: students may quote or paraphrase The book answers questions such as. way, Rosabel is being taunted with a sea itself was tomb silent. 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However, registered schools/colleges for AQA are permitted to copy material from this booklet At the It's 8 marks so spend around 10-12 minutes answering the question. hungry, so the structure emphasises how very colour to describe the girls beautiful red The old man's eyes seemed to glare at the sea on his starboard side. student will answers not already covered by the mark scheme are discussed and legislated for. girl tells her boyfriend she is going to wear her 0000001298 00000 n %%EOF features tells her boyfriend she is going to wear her new student will have the upper Write the declarative sentence on DailyGrammar.com. Indicative Standard close she was with her son or is she doing this to show people around her. %%EOF The writer uses language to describe the setting to be in a cold place, "the pale streaks of foam, clinging to the black rocks", it is a metaphor, the foam is representing the snow which has passed by the snow that is laying on the ground, and the writer has deliberately used this to make the write imagine the cold, snowy surrounding, like . You can compare the student's answer with the example to determine if it is the same standard, better or worse than the example. On the outskirts of bonifaccio. like he is sleeping. very crowded as the houses are close by to each other. the view from the bus on Rosabels journey It's really important to not take things out of context. Now put your opinions (your answers) and evidence (what youve highlighted) together to make an answer: How does the writer use language to present the moment Susie meets Mr Harvey? wraith's veil of sorrow. have at 0000096989 00000 n The boat rose with the swell, inclining upwards to its destruction. structural